[Feedback Request] Almost ready to launch my first store selling a high-protein cheese

I'm ramping up to launch the store, but it still feels off for reasons I can't put my finger on.

I'd appreciate any feedback you have on how, specifically the landing page, could be improved from a design and clarity perspective.

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Does the page sustain your interest?

Is anything unclear? any unanswered questions you're left with?

Are there details that could be removed or added?

Did anything trigger your scammy, sales-speak reflex?

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site: www.eatproteina.com

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Thanks for your time!