[Feedback Request] Almost ready to launch my first store selling a high-protein cheese

I'm ramping up to launch the store, but it still feels off for reasons I can't put my finger on.

I'd appreciate any feedback you have on how, specifically the landing page, could be improved from a design and clarity perspective.

Does the page sustain your interest?

Is anything unclear? any unanswered questions you're left with?

Are there details that could be removed or added?

Did anything trigger your scammy, sales-speak reflex?


Thanks for your time!

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